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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:36 am | |
| (( I already have my footballhuman all planned out in my head. XDD except, he has no name and no picture XD And if You want to keep Alice she could always move to Rhyolite x3
Oh, and could you reply to Aimee? :3 James should find out about Sol real soon! xD )) | |
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Fiona Admin
Posts : 459 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 30 Location : In a Land Far Far Away.
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:42 am | |
| [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Yeaah I'm just trying to think of a reply. Sorry I'm in a slump with all writing right now. I had this brilliant idea for my actual novel a few days ago and since I've been completely useless. | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:48 am | |
| (( ooh. (: well, novels ARE more productive than Roleplaying. So, I don't mind. I just miss people XDD and every time I start a story it gets really short. D: )) | |
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Fiona Admin
Posts : 459 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 30 Location : In a Land Far Far Away.
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:02 am | |
| ooc;// In previous stories I never planned and they all went so far ahead I kept on adding things that I thought were cool that really sucked. In my opinion at least. They never get shorter though, just longer and longer. Haven't finished one yet because I always dragged it out so long I get better and started having to rewriting. Longest I've ever got though was 94 pages in a second draft I believe. I think thats rather extensive. This current story I got the idea two years ago and have constantly been building on. I'd started writing it earlier this year but then planning got so intensive I put writing it on hold, because I knew that it would suffer if I didn't. (Turns out I have multiple societies and governments to flesh out, along with characters and country histories.) Unfortunately I hate planning so it's taking a little while. It turns out I'll probably have to write multiple short stories on multiple characters pasts to get a full idea. Plus the actual story outline, revisions and whatever other ideas I come up with along with weeding out the bad ones I'll be lucky to finish by the time I graduate. Gah, haha. | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:14 am | |
| (( oh wow! Haha. My stories are always short. Except the longest one I've done was 27 pages? I think? It was long, for me. Haha but I only stopped because my friend didnt like it. It was branching off as an idea from her story, and she liked it at first but then she started not to. So I stopped. :3 since then I've just written small things. )) | |
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Fiona Admin
Posts : 459 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 30 Location : In a Land Far Far Away.
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:19 am | |
| ooc;// Mmm yeah that first story was from my brother and neighbor when we were young. All the main characters were based off of us and really it was started when I was like 11. And it really stunk cause no one would want to read it, cause it was long and my handwriting/spelling stunk. And now of coarse everyone wants to read it. Irony! I have to hide that thing! I woke up and my friend was sitting there reading it. I was like "AHH NO! Bad!" They can read this current story once it's done cause personally I'm rather proud of it it's going to be epic! But we'll see haha. | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:23 am | |
| (( haha nice Fiona! I'd love to read it too if you have it on a word document XD Oh, and if I fall asleep on you I'm sorry XDD I'm in my phone. )) | |
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Sunny
Posts : 413 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 29 Location : Behind You
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:29 am | |
| ooc:
Hai~
Yea! 6 charries! x3 | |
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Fiona Admin
Posts : 459 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 30 Location : In a Land Far Far Away.
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:29 am | |
| ooc;// I don't sadly, but I can promise you of it's horrificness. As for the on going one I have a dream of getting it published, so that shall not touch the internet until it is on a bookstores website. Haha. If I start any short stories, though doubtful with all this plus school work looming over head I'll be sure to send them or post them somewhere. (: If alls alright I don't think that I'll reply tonight. I'll be going to bed in a little bit I have to get up earlier tomorrow. And because my brain isn't going much past. "Perhaps he'll say yes to breakfast... Nerines in the kitchen.." I sorry! Xo | |
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Sunny
Posts : 413 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 29 Location : Behind You
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:08 am | |
| "Shit." Lionel muttered seeing as Kolian raced away towards the house and she had a newborn on its feet running after her. He lashed out and his fist connected with his opponent's nose. The newborn hissed and its grip on Lionel loosened a little and Lionel took his opportunity to kick it and shove him towards Sable and Rune. Rune, who was always happy to clean up any mess, instantly leaped onto the newborn. Lionel was about to run after Kolian when her screamed pierced the air. He froze and he ran towards the house, shouting. "Kolian!" He burst through the house and ran to the back. He stopped when he saw the fire that she had created and the remains of the newborn. Lionel leaned against the wall of the house and simply stared at her.
"A moment later the sound of footsteps could be heard crashing into the house and soon enough the three siblings appeared. Wren was holding her limp opponent by the neck and Sable was calmly dragging the body of the other newborn by its neck. "We heard your scream." Rune said, frowning and looking at the fire. "Looks like you roasted someone." he added. "Hmph." Wren grunted, dumping her body into the fire and Sable did the same indifferently as though he had just dumped a sack of groceries into the ground.
"Are you hurt?" Lionel finally spoke, his face blank.
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 7:33 am | |
| Kolian was staring into the fire as Lionel came through, and she didn't even move when the rest came. Slowly, she crouched down and sat up on her legs, in shock. How had she done that? She had created the fire consciously, but when she had broken the newborn's neck, she hadn't meant to. The deafening crack of it's neck sent chills down her spine. Kolian didn't reply to Lionel, but stared at the fire quietly. "I'm sorry." she whispered to the fire, to the bodies that were now being turned to ash. Kolian was always sorry for death, no matter what form it took on. She slowly curled up and put her head in her hands. She didn't even care about her bloodied hand anymore, she was in too much shock. She was afraid and sad for what she had done, even if it had been to protect herself. She was still sad anyways. One newborn on the roof, who had been watching the entire time glared at Kolian's small back. She was the reason the newborn's friends were being roasted. She was the one to blame. The newborn crouched low, and when no one was aware or alert, it attacked Kolian. Kolian didn't see it coming and was breathless as she was knocked aside. The newborn was intent on killing her. There was a very brief and small fight before the 'crack' from a broken neck was heard. But it wasn't the newborn's. The newborn stood over Kolian, Kolian now limp and seemingly dead. Every vampire could heal their broken bones, but the more severe something was the longer it took. The only way to really rid of the vampires was the huge fire. The newborn smirked, forgetting the four other vampires behind it. Kolian just laid there, her neck had already fitted together and her eyes were closed. She wasn't breathing, and no pulse. But no vampire had a pulse or needed to breathe. Kolian looked... Dead.
(( couldn't help it o .o
That's okay Fiona. I fell asleep anyway XDD )) | |
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Jem
Posts : 136 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:04 am | |
| ooc// Ugh. TM is still down and my bird just attacked me! | |
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Sunny
Posts : 413 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 29 Location : Behind You
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:00 pm | |
| "What are you sorry for?" Wren said disbelievingly, staring at her through narrowed eyes. "That newborn had been intending to kill you. Would you rather have been ripped apart by it?" She would have said more if Sable hadn't put a hand on her shoulder. This must have been Kolian's first time killing or else she wouldn't be in shock now. Rune on the other hand wasn't watching Kolian but Lionel. Lionel's face was a whitewall; devoid of any emotion. While the three of them were busy trying to figure out what to do, neither of them were prepared when a newborn leaped from the roof of the house and attacked Kolian, breaking her neck. They stood there in shock as it did it and Lionel snapped back to reality at once; his ebony eyes widening as Kolian's neck snapped. The siblings were stunned and shocked, standing there like statues.
Lionel was the first one to react. With deadly calm, he stalked forward, grabbed the newborn by its neck and with a sharp flick, twisted it to one side. As the newborn fell, he shoved it towards the fire and instead of watching it burn, he looked down at the limp figure of Kolian. His face was blank, but the shock was in his eyes. "Lionel." Rune said calmly. "She's not dead." Lionel snapped him a look. It was obvious that he didn't believe him. "She's still alive, idiot." Wren cut in, frowning.
"She looks pretty dead to me." Lionel said harshly, catching them off guard. Not even Rune had seen him in such a black mood. Without another word, Lionel turned his back to them and stalked away, vanishing into the forest. | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:05 pm | |
| (( aww Lionel's not going to stay and huggle his Kolian and be all crying? XD; )) | |
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Sunny
Posts : 413 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 29 Location : Behind You
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:06 pm | |
| [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]He's pissed about it now. o.o He'll probably cry later. | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:10 pm | |
| Like Rune and Wren had explained, Kolian was not dead. Quite technically she was dead, seeing as she was a vampire and all, but lifeless, no. She was not lifeless. Basically speaking she was just sleeping until she healed all the way, and of course it would take time, and a lot of it.
(( short. |D she's sleeping, what else can I say? XD )) | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:10 pm | |
| (( aww Poor Lionel. He'll probably get pissed again when Kolian wakes up XDD )) | |
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Sunny
Posts : 413 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 29 Location : Behind You
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:11 pm | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:13 pm | |
| (( XD okay. I'll say that Sol came home, freaked out because Kolian's like her baby, and took Kolian to her room and whatever TIME SKIP. XD
you post or me? )) | |
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Jem
Posts : 136 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:15 pm | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:16 pm | |
| (( *pokes Jem* x3 do you want 6 character limit too? ouo )) | |
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Jem
Posts : 136 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:17 pm | |
| ooc// Finally you say hello. ;o; Sorta...
Um. I guess? I only have two characters right now, so it's not really effecting me. XD | |
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:21 pm | |
| Sol was in her room, trying to calmly paint a picture. She hadn't been able to do anything since the accident with Kolian, and she was so worried about the young girl that her paintings and drawings had been awful. Sol slowly put her paint brush down and sighed deeply. She wondered how Lionel was doing... poor boy.
Kolian was laying in her room on her bed, still as dead-looking as ever. It was late afternoon and the covers were pulled over her body. She was wearing a different outfit than when she was attacked, because Sol had taken very good care of her and didn't want her to be covered in dirt and grass when she woke up. The first sign that Kolian was going to be okay was when her finger twitched slightly. Then her eyes opened. She gasped lightly and her eyes opened wide. She felt too weak to sit up but she craved one thing only, blood. It had been a week at least since she had blood and she needed it if she was going to get any better. Kolian had no way of heaving herself out of bed or speaking. Her voice was gone for the time being and she had no energy at all what so ever. All she could remember was that vampire, then white.
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panda
Posts : 928 Join date : 2010-07-21 Age : 29 Location : @Etiloy Island stalking Cally
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:21 pm | |
| (( XD I'm so sorry x3; *hugs*
And just say sure because I want a new character. XDDD )) | |
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Jem
Posts : 136 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Roleplay Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:22 pm | |
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